She sits clam amidst the gushing sea
Her breath a celestial symphony
The wind playing along her hair
Unleash supremacy unaware
The sea feels captive under a spell
As her dainty feet on its rock settle
Music glitters, sprays across the skies
As violin plays with her glancing eyes
When her hand glides over the sand
It quivers, ripples- loses command
The roaring waves caress her feet
Fall back mute and gently sweep
She rises like a pleasant cadence
Flowers bathe in her blissful fragrance
She is woman, a glory, a royalty
Mother Nature, a Goddess in harmony!
~Sam
7 comments:
Lovely!!!!! :D
Ah. This is nice.
But a doubt.
//Unleash supremacy unaware//
Shouldn't this be 'Unleashing supremacy unaware'?
(To keep with the tense).
nice one Sam.. One of your best, no doubt..
awesome poem!! keep going....
Jai Ho Mangalmay Ho
Lovely blog header!! Amazing poem... very well written!!
A-W-E-S-O-M-E!!!
@Amulya- Thanks! :D
@Vijitha- Thank you!
Hmm.. has written it that way before but somehow felt this was better. So ignored the tense.
@Adam- Thank you!
@Vish- Thanks!
@Patricia- Oh hello! Welcome to the blog. Thank you! :)
@Ranjana- Thanks :)
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