Monday, March 14, 2011

Little heart!

My heart like a baby
Silently sleeps
It dreams of the pleasantries
Smile dimples its cheeks

Its two curious eyes
Too innocent but deep
It believes they will
Never have to weep

Its tiny two hands hold
Love so profound
It’s grip too loose
With a faith unbound

It breaths slowly
Taking in life
One breath at a time
Its lungs fill it with goodness divine

With tiny steps
It walks on the ground
It will slip, it will trip
It can spin around

My heart like a baby
Doesn’t care, doesn’t know
It is still a little child
Which will some day, grow!


P.S: This is the first time I have explored analogy in a poem. Please do let me know your views.


Vinitha said...

Good one I say! :)

sucheta said...

"its tiny two hands hold
Love so profound
It’s grip too loose
With a faith unbound " loved these lines :)

Arti said...

This is very beautiful!

Pratibha The Talent said...

you have really a cute, innocent heart like a baby indeed. I really liked it.

Raksha Bhat said...

Sam don't let it grow!!!:)
nice lines,like everytime:)

Adam said...

@Sam: Nice analogy.. :) And like Raksha said, don't let it grow!

subtlescribbler said...

innocent and touching! growing up is fun but when u r finally an adult the heart yearns to go back :)


Ambika said...

Cute :) Brings back a smile! You have a nice n easy way of writing Sam!

Sameera said...

@Vinitha- Thank you!! :D

@Sucheta- I like those lines the best too! :)

@Arti- Thank you!! Welcome to the blog!

@Pratibha- Thank you dear! Glad you liked it! :D

Sameera said...

@Raksha- :) I wish pray hope and try that it doesn't grow!

Thank you!!

@Adam- Thanks! Nice to see you back on blog.

Thank you Sarah! So true.. ! :)

Thank you Ambika! :D

sibi said...

Good one! Continue writing!!

Sameera said...

Thank you Siby!!

srinivasmurthy said...

nice one frnd super creation continue nice baby

Related Posts Plugin for WordPress, Blogger...