My heart like a baby
Silently sleeps
It dreams of the pleasantries
Smile dimples its cheeks
Its two curious eyes
Too innocent but deep
It believes they will
Never have to weep
Its tiny two hands hold
Love so profound
It’s grip too loose
With a faith unbound
It breaths slowly
Taking in life
One breath at a time
Its lungs fill it with goodness divine
With tiny steps
It walks on the ground
It will slip, it will trip
It can spin around
My heart like a baby
Doesn’t care, doesn’t know
It is still a little child
Which will some day, grow!
~Sam
P.S: This is the first time I have explored analogy in a poem. Please do let me know your views.
13 comments:
Good one I say! :)
"its tiny two hands hold
Love so profound
It’s grip too loose
With a faith unbound " loved these lines :)
This is very beautiful!
you have really a cute, innocent heart like a baby indeed. I really liked it.
Sam don't let it grow!!!:)
nice lines,like everytime:)
@Sam: Nice analogy.. :) And like Raksha said, don't let it grow!
innocent and touching! growing up is fun but when u r finally an adult the heart yearns to go back :)
sarah
Cute :) Brings back a smile! You have a nice n easy way of writing Sam!
@Vinitha- Thank you!! :D
@Sucheta- I like those lines the best too! :)
@Arti- Thank you!! Welcome to the blog!
@Pratibha- Thank you dear! Glad you liked it! :D
@Raksha- :) I wish pray hope and try that it doesn't grow!
Thank you!!
@Adam- Thanks! Nice to see you back on blog.
@Sarah
Thank you Sarah! So true.. ! :)
@Ambika-
Thank you Ambika! :D
Good one! Continue writing!!
Thank you Siby!!
nice one frnd super creation continue nice baby
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