I can see you bowled over by me
But I like it that you do not show
I can feel your joy when I walk by your side
And I like it that you keep it low
At times I catch you stare
And you shake your head as I glare
I know you get lost in my eyes
But like it when you hide it with simple lies
The way you prefer to hug by a shoulder
Keeping it decent and not getting bolder
Simple ways in which you show some care
You give me my space but, tell me you are there
I can never express my affection
Or tell you how I appreciate this connection
All I can say is, my blood feels like wine
And I am really glad that you are mine.
~Sam
PS: FICTION
PPS: Really,FICTION!!! ;)
19 comments:
Good one Sam.. :)"Simple Discomfort" had so much heart in it, that this one sorta pales in comparison.. :P but this one is really good too.. Keep rhyming! :)
Simple awesome!!!
loved the sweet, innocent, romantic gestures in your poem ''At times I catch you stare
And you shake your head as I glare''
heartfelt!superb!!
fact is more romantic than fiction...:)
@Adam- thank you!
@Viyoma- hey thanks for stopping by :)
@Pratibha- Thank you!!
@Yuvika- hmm..
ahem.. so much emphasis on it being "fictional" raises doubts :D
anyhow.. :) i love the aplomb in your voice!
my blood feels like wine that is one brilliant line!
Wow! Someone is spouting poetry and that too romantic ones. Well, I can't stop thinking but that disclaimer! Well, who cares about disclaimers, anyway.
Joy always,
Susan
Wokay. That disclaimer was needed ;)
Sam and romance? I am warming up to the idea ;)
@S
Oh missed you! Happy to see your comment. Ha ha Fiction part is a joke extended from the previous poem to this one. ;)
Thank you.. thats my fav line too ;)
@Susan
Ahha..was waiting for you all.. the regular blog buddies! Lol! The disclaimer started off as a joke with few friends.. just pulled it up on the blog as well.
:)
@Vinitha
Ha ha ha.. I hope managed to shock you again. ;)
ok, jokes apart...what's cooking? someone falling in love?
@Amit
Oh nahi yaar.. not falling in love appreciating love.
no worries, appreciating love is always the first step of falling in love...you are on the right track..keep it up ;-)
Won't debate on that.. it comes from the guru. ;)
Hi came here through Amit's blog and had to say... that was a very cute poem... in simple words really... :) :)
Cheers,
Annie.
Awww... so sweet... And hold on... you want me to believe that PPS in this post!! wont buy this gurl, wont buy this. This is so not 'FICTION' :P
Waiting for a poem of confession someday from you!!! :)
Cheers,
Sukanya
@Annie
Hey thank you! Btw checked your photo blog. Awesome clicks!
@Sukanya
A writer falls in love with words.. not necessarily with people. ;)
Sure.. will definitely write a confession poem when something does happen. :D
very well balanced and well put up thoughts :)
Thanks Manasa. :D
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