Poetry Type: Refrain (One line repetition)
When you walk in the crowd,
When you walk in the crowd,
And we steal glances.
At times catching myself laughing,
On the silly things you say.
I see what I feel for you.
Some attempts to show,
Your better side.
I pay stark attention,
Pick up little good things.
I see what I feel for you.
The days when my friends,
Laugh about your dumb jokes.
And I ruthlessly defend,
My illogical belief in your genius brain.
I see what I feel for you.
Those little moments when,
You stand somewhere close.
My ears picking up your every word,
Hearing you step away or near.
I see what I feel for you
My eyes trained to catch your image,
A silent hope that your’s,
Would catch mine.
I see what I feel for you.
The way you are now a changed man,
More to yourself in a silent corner.
Your heart thrown away,
To that lucky someone.
The contented silly smile,
I see what I feel for you.
But that’s just how crazy,
My sense will let me be.
Express a simple discomfort,
In a silly poem about how,
I see what I feel for you.
~Sam
PS: F.I.C.T.I.O.N (don't get too many ideas!)
3 comments:
as always brilliant! :) but Who is this person? ;)
Kidding.. Great work Sam! And do keep writing poetry!
Nice one Sam...And that P.S actually makes me get some ideas :P
@Adam
Thanks!!
@Sukanya
Thank you!! Ha ha ha.. now added a PPS in the new poem. LOL!
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