Thursday, January 27, 2011

In simple words!



I can see you bowled over by me
But I like it that you do not show
I can feel your joy when I walk by your side
And I like it that you keep it low

At times I catch you stare
And you shake your head as I glare
I know you get lost in my eyes
But like it when you hide it with simple lies

The way you prefer to hug by a shoulder
Keeping it decent and not getting bolder
Simple ways in which you show some care
You give me my space but, tell me you are there

I can never express my affection
Or tell you how I appreciate this connection
All I can say is, my blood feels like wine
And I am really glad that you are mine.

~Sam

PS: FICTION 
PPS: Really,FICTION!!! ;)

19 comments:

Adam said...

Good one Sam.. :)"Simple Discomfort" had so much heart in it, that this one sorta pales in comparison.. :P but this one is really good too.. Keep rhyming! :)

Viyoma said...

Simple awesome!!!

Pratibha The Talent said...

loved the sweet, innocent, romantic gestures in your poem ''At times I catch you stare
And you shake your head as I glare''
heartfelt!superb!!

Yuvika said...

fact is more romantic than fiction...:)

Sameera said...

@Adam- thank you!

@Viyoma- hey thanks for stopping by :)

@Pratibha- Thank you!!

@Yuvika- hmm..

S said...

ahem.. so much emphasis on it being "fictional" raises doubts :D

anyhow.. :) i love the aplomb in your voice!
my blood feels like wine that is one brilliant line!

Susan Deborah said...

Wow! Someone is spouting poetry and that too romantic ones. Well, I can't stop thinking but that disclaimer! Well, who cares about disclaimers, anyway.

Joy always,
Susan

Vinitha said...

Wokay. That disclaimer was needed ;)
Sam and romance? I am warming up to the idea ;)

Sameera said...

@S

Oh missed you! Happy to see your comment. Ha ha Fiction part is a joke extended from the previous poem to this one. ;)

Thank you.. thats my fav line too ;)

Sameera said...

@Susan

Ahha..was waiting for you all.. the regular blog buddies! Lol! The disclaimer started off as a joke with few friends.. just pulled it up on the blog as well.

:)

@Vinitha
Ha ha ha.. I hope managed to shock you again. ;)

Amit Gupta said...

ok, jokes apart...what's cooking? someone falling in love?

Sameera said...

@Amit
Oh nahi yaar.. not falling in love appreciating love.

Amit Gupta said...

no worries, appreciating love is always the first step of falling in love...you are on the right track..keep it up ;-)

Sameera said...

Won't debate on that.. it comes from the guru. ;)

IcE MaiDeN said...

Hi came here through Amit's blog and had to say... that was a very cute poem... in simple words really... :) :)

Cheers,
Annie.

Sukanya said...

Awww... so sweet... And hold on... you want me to believe that PPS in this post!! wont buy this gurl, wont buy this. This is so not 'FICTION' :P

Waiting for a poem of confession someday from you!!! :)

Cheers,
Sukanya

Sameera said...

@Annie

Hey thank you! Btw checked your photo blog. Awesome clicks!


@Sukanya

A writer falls in love with words.. not necessarily with people. ;)

Sure.. will definitely write a confession poem when something does happen. :D

manasa said...

very well balanced and well put up thoughts :)

Sameera said...

Thanks Manasa. :D

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