Sunday, May 1, 2011

Love Note!

 

Your eyes give away what you hide
Your heart through your eyes confide
Conversing glances, words cannot define
I feel my heart dip in wine!

~Sam



P:S: I tried very hard to build this, add a para or two. But these four lines- are complete. No addition was possible.

7 comments:

aakash said...

Sweet.. indeed it's complete!

Vivek said...

Nice one Sammy :)

Susan Deborah said...

Your heart would definitely taste yumm if dipped in wine.

Liking the dance of the muse in you.

Joy always,
Susan

Amropali said...

*sigh* those glances...

and the sweet nothing we think/we believe we see in them.

Ambika said...

I can picture a romantic couple over dinner... love the fact that the short poem conveys so much!

Sameera said...

@Aakash :)

@Vivek- Thanks!

@Susan- Susan!!! How have you been? Hope you have recovered and are joyous as ever!

Thank you! :)

@Ampropali- Ha ha ha "we think/we believe" couldn't agree more!

@Ambika- :] Yep Short poems!

Ambika said...

Hey Sameera! I've just awarded you the Versatile Blogger award ... you can read my post at http://sunnyellowindow.blogspot.com/2011/05/versatility-in-blogging.html. It's totally your choice whether to play it by the rules or not :) But I just wanted to convey that I love spending time on your blog!

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