Sunday, May 1, 2011

Love Note!


Your eyes give away what you hide
Your heart through your eyes confide
Conversing glances, words cannot define
I feel my heart dip in wine!


P:S: I tried very hard to build this, add a para or two. But these four lines- are complete. No addition was possible.


aakash said...

Sweet.. indeed it's complete!

Vivek said...

Nice one Sammy :)

Susan Deborah said...

Your heart would definitely taste yumm if dipped in wine.

Liking the dance of the muse in you.

Joy always,

Amropali said...

*sigh* those glances...

and the sweet nothing we think/we believe we see in them.

Ambika said...

I can picture a romantic couple over dinner... love the fact that the short poem conveys so much!

Sameera said...

@Aakash :)

@Vivek- Thanks!

@Susan- Susan!!! How have you been? Hope you have recovered and are joyous as ever!

Thank you! :)

@Ampropali- Ha ha ha "we think/we believe" couldn't agree more!

@Ambika- :] Yep Short poems!

Ambika said...

Hey Sameera! I've just awarded you the Versatile Blogger award ... you can read my post at It's totally your choice whether to play it by the rules or not :) But I just wanted to convey that I love spending time on your blog!

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