Your eyes give away what you hide
Your heart through your eyes confide
Conversing glances, words cannot define
I feel my heart dip in wine!
~Sam
P:S: I tried very hard to build this, add a para or two. But these four lines- are complete. No addition was possible.
7 comments:
Sweet.. indeed it's complete!
Nice one Sammy :)
Your heart would definitely taste yumm if dipped in wine.
Liking the dance of the muse in you.
Joy always,
Susan
*sigh* those glances...
and the sweet nothing we think/we believe we see in them.
I can picture a romantic couple over dinner... love the fact that the short poem conveys so much!
@Aakash :)
@Vivek- Thanks!
@Susan- Susan!!! How have you been? Hope you have recovered and are joyous as ever!
Thank you! :)
@Ampropali- Ha ha ha "we think/we believe" couldn't agree more!
@Ambika- :] Yep Short poems!
Hey Sameera! I've just awarded you the Versatile Blogger award ... you can read my post at http://sunnyellowindow.blogspot.com/2011/05/versatility-in-blogging.html. It's totally your choice whether to play it by the rules or not :) But I just wanted to convey that I love spending time on your blog!
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