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| (c) Ashish Arora Photography- Used with permission |
I can only see as far my sight,
My mind is made up; I am ready for the flight,
Over the hills, I will fly, into the open skies
The reflection of the world, I will behold in my eyes
Too young, they tell me, what do you know?
These wishes are pointless, someday you will grow.
Uncertainties will ground you, like these pebbles, under your feet,
I am sorry, my child, someday, destiny you shall meet.
They say, I might be left gloomy and teary-eyed,
But what if; I make it, to the other side?
Let the fate come find me, somewhere on the path
At least, I can pride, I had braved a start.
~Sam
P.S: This was written as a part of Captured writings. The guy who clicks these beautiful photographs you can check his page here .
11 comments:
Excellence,as usual!!!:-)lovely rhyming..
I love the way you rhyme.. :) its beautiful and has got so much meaning.. :)
Some lines from my version: :P
I am prepared to lose.
I am ready for sacrifice.
I will get what I want.
No matter what the price.
I do not trust my fate.
I will rather make my own.
I will keep kicking the door.
Even, if I keep getting thrown.
I like the last para immensely -
They say, I might be left gloomy and teary-eyed,
But what if; I make it, to the other side?
Let the fate come find me, somewhere on the path
At least, I can pride, I had braved a start.
lovely, as always!
wowww! it's so deeep!!
WHY cant i ever think so beautifully?
BRAVE HEART!!
The click is apt and perfect!
My fav lines "They say, I might be left gloomy and teary-eyed,
But what if; I make it, to the other side?"
Dear Sameera,
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@Rahul- Thank you!
@Arpita- Thanks Arpita! :)
@Kunal- Those are some powerful lines.. I need to head to the poem. :)
@Yuvika- Thank you :)
@wafa- Ahaa! Finally you made it to my blog. Welcome girl!! And, don't forget to drop by at Captured Writings.
@Red- My fav are the two line following the lines of your choice. :)
@Blog Junta- Yay!!! Thanks!
amazing poem :)
A lovely bit of a poem.....enjoyed it throughly...& yeah special mention for the photographer.....a ponderous pic!!!
@GeetS- Thank you!! :)
@Saptadeep- Thank you!! :)
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