Tuesday, October 25, 2011

Tell me something about you [Poem]

How naïve can you be, when you ask-
Tell me something about you dear,
How foolish is that, not to know,
Merely lending an ear is not how you hear

I will still tell you, that I lived twenty four,
Already changed like a million fold,
Little different I am each time,
Each time, my feet touch the floor

But, if you want to persist, pursue this goal
Be a friend, a friend till I am trembling old
And that’s only way will hear my dear,
Something about me- without being told!



Rahul said...

Now,this touched me.So I 'm gonna reply in verse too....:-D
"The heights of joy,or the depths of pain,
They all change you,the same things don't remain..
But for every little moment you collect in your memory,
A small syllable gets added to your life's story!!"
Wish you a story with a super happy ending.......:-D

TheBluntBlogger said...


I love you for this one <3 I so do!!!!!

Yuvika said...

I was reminded of the famous lines: grow old with me, the best is yet to be...

loved ur poem!

Corinne Rodrigues said...

Love and friendship means understanding beyond words...

Saru Singhal said...

I love this poem. The last line of first paragraph is so true. Seriously, it's a mind blowing poem...:) Great work Sam...


KP said...

This is damn good.. certain feeling goes beyond words dont they?

Sameera said...

@Rahul- Nice value addition to the poem. Maybe you should add a par to it and publish on your blog :)

@Chintan/Shubh - Thanks!! :D

@Yuvika- Thank you!

@Corinne- So true!

@Saru- Thank you so much Saru!

@KP :)Yep.. they do!

:-Dee said...

Wow!! absolutely loved it!!! :)

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