What is that prudent planning you do?
You think life won't surprise you?
When it does,
Let it amaze and nourish your soul,
Be it joy, pain or grief- embrace it all!
Remember, you are a wave of the ocean,
Where else can you float, but to the shore?
~Sam
16 comments:
beautiful :)
beautiful :) u have a gift of weaving complexities into such simple words and make it look beautiful :)
beautiful, breaking it down to reality...
This is amazin...the last line is beautiful!...:)
Wow! That was profound. Your positive energy, your zest for life reflects in your words.
http://rimlybezbaruah.blogspot.com/2011/12/destiny.html
The shore, yes. Sam, your muse is working overtime, I reckon.
Joy always,
Susan
Mmmm...really nice...I wish we could all let go of our planning and let life take it's course!
Lovely poem :) I like the page design too.
"Remember, you are a wave of the ocean,
Where else can you float, but to the shore?"
Loved it! Great poem :)
love it - a kind of take off from the previous one :)
beautiful and positive. Accurate of life.
Life comes with surprises and we learn how to live from those moments.. Lovely poem
wowww... very profound and meaningful.. snd I like the way you have played with metaphors. Loved it Sameera! :)
@maliny- Thank you :)
@Rashmi- thanks. :D
@Daisy- :) Yeah.. the reality.
@Ashish- Thank you :D
@Rimly- Thanks. I am glad you felt that way about me after reading this poem.
@Susan- :d :D :)
@Corinne- Yeah, we should do some planning, but we shouldn't get too dejected in things change. :)
@Sulekkha- Thank you!! It took a while to land up with the simple design. Glad you liked it.
@Jessica- Thank you :D Those are my fav lines of the poem too
@Jan- :) Thanks
@Farlia- Yes, we do. :) Thanks!
@Dee- :D Glad you liked it.
Loved the last line. The climax said it all.
Thank you Saru!
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