Saturday, December 3, 2011

Come unprepared [Poem]

It is easy to be charmed,
So effortless, to let the heart stray,
But, come talk to me on a darker day
See me in the blackest of moods
Let me wander -detached and alone
Follow me if you have the heart to
Come unprepared, into my life
See the brightest day, the deepest night
Don’t catch me when I fall
Fall with me gracefully, touch the ground
Then name yourself mine, and, I’ll term myself yours.



Anonymous said...

OMG!!! Sameera???!!! beautifully written.. but you know we have to talk about this offline :P :P

Krishnapriya said...

Sam.. there is one hell of romance in there!! and the words are brimming with passion... wonderful words dear..
"Don’t catch me when I fall
Fall with me gracefully" - these are my fav!!

Yuvika said...

very romantic

Saru Singhal said...

Awww, fall with me with grace and the last line...Loved it...You rock Sam in any form of writing:)

TheBluntBlogger said...

//Come unprepared, into my life
See the brightest day, the deepest night//

You catch me off guard always, I wonder if you can read, but there is a mysterious side of mine that your poems can read and see through :)

Ambika said...

This is a deep one, awesome! Almost always the honeymoon period of falling in love involves just the best sides of the couple right? The darker sides come out only later :)

Red Handed said...

Effing beautiful!! This is going to be my inside my Valentine card :P
Beautiful beautiful beaautiful!

Saptadeep said...

hard to express myself nw....luved it throughly...simple n yet spoke d world about love!!!

Sameera said...

@Rashmi- :) :d :P

@KP- Thank you!! :D

@Yuvika- :)

@Saru- Thank you for the kind words.

@Chintan- Those two are my fav lines from the poem. I am glad you can connect to my poems.

@Ambika- ha ha.. from what I have seen... very true. Thanks.

@Red- :P Thanks!!

@Saptadeep- Thank you! :)

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