It is easy to be charmed,
So effortless, to let the heart stray,
But, come talk to me on a darker day
See me in the blackest of moods
Let me wander -detached and alone
Follow me if you have the heart to
Come unprepared, into my life
See the brightest day, the deepest night
Don’t catch me when I fall
Fall with me gracefully, touch the ground
Then name yourself mine, and, I’ll term myself yours.
~Sam
9 comments:
OMG!!! Sameera???!!! beautifully written.. but you know we have to talk about this offline :P :P
Sam.. there is one hell of romance in there!! and the words are brimming with passion... wonderful words dear..
"Don’t catch me when I fall
Fall with me gracefully" - these are my fav!!
very romantic
Awww, fall with me with grace and the last line...Loved it...You rock Sam in any form of writing:)
Sameera,
//Come unprepared, into my life
See the brightest day, the deepest night//
You catch me off guard always, I wonder if you can read, but there is a mysterious side of mine that your poems can read and see through :)
This is a deep one, awesome! Almost always the honeymoon period of falling in love involves just the best sides of the couple right? The darker sides come out only later :)
Effing beautiful!! This is going to be my inside my Valentine card :P
Beautiful beautiful beaautiful!
hard to express myself nw....luved it throughly...simple n yet spoke d world about love!!!
@Rashmi- :) :d :P
@KP- Thank you!! :D
@Yuvika- :)
@Saru- Thank you for the kind words.
@Chintan- Those two are my fav lines from the poem. I am glad you can connect to my poems.
@Ambika- ha ha.. from what I have seen... very true. Thanks.
@Red- :P Thanks!!
@Saptadeep- Thank you! :)
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