first attempt..is quite good :) I am not very good at writing poems..so..I don't even try much..and that's why..when I come across something which is short, sweet and says it all..I just can't help but admire it. :)
Sameera, I think this was one of your best. I liked that you used simpler words, the progressive style is amazing and thus the ending is so much stronger :)
@Chintan- Thank you- that is very encouraging. @Ambika- Thanks- was waiting for someone to notice the change in design. Thanks! @Ria- Thank you and welcome to my blog! @blackandwhiteheart- Thanks.. welcome to the blog!
This is one of best short poems I have come across ever. I really like simple words used in poem here. Can you list here some more such like poems as those are quite easy to understand and remember.
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Survived till now, will survive some more.
Loved this. Short but said it all.
How thoughtful! nice composition sam...
"Survived so far, will survive some more!" Sums it up. Survival is the key.
nice poem!though short very sweet!
Life moves on, isn't it and that makes it beautiful.
Joy always,
Susan
first attempt..is quite good :)
I am not very good at writing poems..so..I don't even try much..and that's why..when I come across something which is short, sweet and says it all..I just can't help but admire it. :)
Keep it coming!
It's absolutely true and this is what I keep on telling myself when life is harsh. Beautifully penned Sam...:)
Survived so far, will survive some more!
Have loved it so far, will love more - cheers to your poetry!
Sameera, I think this was one of your best. I liked that you used simpler words, the progressive style is amazing and thus the ending is so much stronger :)
Very well done!
Cheers
Chintan
Interesting, "progressive poem" is new to me! Makes a stronger impact on the reader I guess, as it builds up to the end.
And I liike your new blog design :)
Nice poetry! Liked the ending
Good one. :)
P.S Got here from Redhanded's blog.
really beautiful, painful. and talks a mountain about enduring pain.
got here through "saru singhal"'s blog... this 5 line post is enough to make me constantly look for new posts from you..
Thank you everybody!!
@Chintan- Thank you- that is very encouraging.
@Ambika- Thanks- was waiting for someone to notice the change in design. Thanks!
@Ria- Thank you and welcome to my blog!
@blackandwhiteheart- Thanks.. welcome to the blog!
Beautifully written, deep thoughts ..
This is one of best short poems I have come across ever. I really like simple words used in poem here. Can you list here some more such like poems as those are quite easy to understand and remember.
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