Life in a jiffy..: Like the wind [Haiku]

Monday, August 8, 2011

Like the wind [Haiku]

Source: toolonginthisplace.blogspot.com

I am like the wind,

You sure, cannot, make me stay,

Till you breathe me in!

~Sam

P.S. It is a very simple haiku, little romantic and heart warming but if read between the lines there more to it.

10 comments:

Victor Guerra said...: Very profound.; August 8, 2011 at 11:27 PM
Saru Singhal said...: Remarkable....; August 9, 2011 at 2:20 AM
Sunil Padiyar said...: Few lines, few words but has lot in it... Loved it..; August 9, 2011 at 11:52 AM
KP said...: Very nice!! but makes me sad though!; August 9, 2011 at 2:50 PM
chitra said...: niceeeeeeeeee; August 9, 2011 at 5:18 PM
aakash said...: aahh a Haiku moment indeed!; August 9, 2011 at 6:19 PM
Sukanya said...: Sweet!!! Someone is getting better at this. Proud of u Sam :); August 9, 2011 at 8:13 PM
Hemant said...: Loved it....passionate lines.; August 9, 2011 at 11:02 PM
A Sunny Yellow Window said...: Beautiful!; August 11, 2011 at 9:29 AM
Sameera said...: Thanks everybody! :); August 13, 2011 at 9:12 AM

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