Saturday, August 27, 2011

Ignorant[Short poem]



How foolish was I, when I searched around
Seeking you in every one I met
How ignorant was I, all along
For you dwell in me, undiscovered as yet!

~Sam


14 comments:

Ambika said...

Beautiful four lines! Brings back memories of my grandmom telling me this in her own warm words. Good one.

KP said...

very strong words, in 4 lines.. nice..

Kalyan said...

Sometimes somethings are so near yet we go distances to search for it...lovely words...beautifully crafted lines.

Saru Singhal said...

Impressive writeup, lovely use of words...

Chintan said...

wow!! this is so awesome :)

thank you for visiting my blog...

Susan Deborah said...

Meaningful verse, Sam. I am reminded of a doha of Kabir's when I read this. The essence of the verse (doha) is something like this. The musk deer searches everywhere for that lovely smell which is emanating from his body, little knowing that he carries the smell himself.

Joy always,
Susan

ashish said...

this is brilliant Sam! really nice...:)

sowmya said...

wonderful thought :)

Vivek said...

A very Nice verse ,
Agrees to Susan .

Hemant said...

U write gr88 short poems....this one is an awesome piece for sure..

aakash said...

yes, quite a verse..
loved it :)

निशांत मिश्र - Nishant Mishra said...

Hmmm... I see it both at sensual and metaphysical levels:)

Sameera said...

Thank you everybody!! :)

@Susan- Yeah.. that's the essence. Thanks for sharing :)

Sunil Padiyar said...

Very nice composition. Thought it is short, it has deep thoughts embedded...

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