Beautiful four lines! Brings back memories of my grandmom telling me this in her own warm words. Good one.
very strong words, in 4 lines.. nice..
Sometimes somethings are so near yet we go distances to search for it...lovely words...beautifully crafted lines.
Impressive writeup, lovely use of words...
wow!! this is so awesome :) thank you for visiting my blog...
Meaningful verse, Sam. I am reminded of a doha of Kabir's when I read this. The essence of the verse (doha) is something like this. The musk deer searches everywhere for that lovely smell which is emanating from his body, little knowing that he carries the smell himself. Joy always,Susan
this is brilliant Sam! really nice...:)
wonderful thought :)
A very Nice verse , Agrees to Susan .
U write gr88 short poems....this one is an awesome piece for sure..
yes, quite a verse..loved it :)
Hmmm... I see it both at sensual and metaphysical levels:)
Thank you everybody!! :)@Susan- Yeah.. that's the essence. Thanks for sharing :)
Very nice composition. Thought it is short, it has deep thoughts embedded...
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