Wednesday, November 9, 2011

At First Sight! [Poem]



There is sudden charm around me
When I catch your glancing eyes
I feel beautifully young and bold,
Yes, that’s the feeling precise

When you walk towards me,
Futile, my effort of thinking twice
I could toss my world aside
To be enticed and to entice

When you pause to catch a breath,
Weigh your words before they fall
You make me feel precious
I am such a girl after all

As we stand beside each other,
With a million thoughts on our mind
We both are wishing the same-love,
“I wish you could be mine!”

~Sam


21 comments:

Anonymous said...

lovely sammie:)

:-Dee said...

Penned beautifully...!!! :)

Rosette Princess said...

Beautiful! loved it

Rahul Bhatia said...

Very beautiful poetry...

roopz said...

Lovely lines...
Thanks for sharing...

Regards
village girl

Saru Singhal said...

Well, this is one of the most romantic poems I have read ever. Simple, honest and lovely! You took my heart away with this poem:) :) :)

Sameera said...

@Minnu- :) Thanks

@Dee- :)Thank you

@RPrincess- Thank you! :)

@Rahul ji- Thank you! :)

@Roopz- Thank you! :)

@Saru- :) :D :D That comment for a wonderful poet herself. Ahh.. I feel proud :d Wishing you a lovely Day!

magiceye said...

an awww poem.... lovely!

punamjr said...

Lovely!!

Harsha said...

Aww! This is awesome. So simple yet highly expressive. The last two paras stand out..

rashmi said...

:) really liked it :) its so simple yet so beautiful... every simple line means a lot :)

subtlescribbler said...

love is all we need...i always say that :)

a wonderful thought interlaced in beautiful words!

sarah

Hemant said...

Beautifully narrated and so much suitable for the title you gave to the poem....A sweet piece with no place for sourness in life :)

Sameera said...

@Saru- Huge mistake..! In the comment for you it if from instead of for.

@Magic Eye- Thank you!! :)

@punamjr- Thank you :)

@Harsha- Thanks! Yep.. the last two paras :)

@rashmi- Thank you Rashmi!! :D Kya baat hai!

@sarah- Thank you for the kind words.

@Hemant- Thank you! :)

Seяendipity™ said...

I left a gift for you at my latest post :)

SUB said...

lovely lines sam :)

Krishnapriya said...

Ah.. lovely.. how nice it is to fall in love.. wonderful feel.. aptly expressed in those lines..

Sameera said...

@Serendipity- Thanks! :) Will check it out!

@SUB- Thank you!! :)

@KP- :) Thanks KP

Punam said...

Oh I've been here before!! :)

Sameera said...

@Punam- :D

Rajendra raikwar said...

Awesome

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