There is sudden charm around me
When I catch your glancing eyes
I feel beautifully young and bold,
Yes, that’s the feeling precise
When you walk towards me,
Futile, my effort of thinking twice
I could toss my world aside
To be enticed and to entice
When you pause to catch a breath,
Weigh your words before they fall
You make me feel precious
I am such a girl after all
As we stand beside each other,
With a million thoughts on our mind
We both are wishing the same-love,
“I wish you could be mine!”
~Sam
19 comments:
lovely sammie:)
Penned beautifully...!!! :)
Beautiful! loved it
Very beautiful poetry...
Lovely lines...
Thanks for sharing...
Regards
village girl
Well, this is one of the most romantic poems I have read ever. Simple, honest and lovely! You took my heart away with this poem:) :) :)
@Minnu- :) Thanks
@Dee- :)Thank you
@RPrincess- Thank you! :)
@Rahul ji- Thank you! :)
@Roopz- Thank you! :)
@Saru- :) :D :D That comment for a wonderful poet herself. Ahh.. I feel proud :d Wishing you a lovely Day!
an awww poem.... lovely!
Lovely!!
Aww! This is awesome. So simple yet highly expressive. The last two paras stand out..
:) really liked it :) its so simple yet so beautiful... every simple line means a lot :)
love is all we need...i always say that :)
a wonderful thought interlaced in beautiful words!
sarah
Beautifully narrated and so much suitable for the title you gave to the poem....A sweet piece with no place for sourness in life :)
@Saru- Huge mistake..! In the comment for you it if from instead of for.
@Magic Eye- Thank you!! :)
@punamjr- Thank you :)
@Harsha- Thanks! Yep.. the last two paras :)
@rashmi- Thank you Rashmi!! :D Kya baat hai!
@sarah- Thank you for the kind words.
@Hemant- Thank you! :)
I left a gift for you at my latest post :)
lovely lines sam :)
Ah.. lovely.. how nice it is to fall in love.. wonderful feel.. aptly expressed in those lines..
@Serendipity- Thanks! :) Will check it out!
@SUB- Thank you!! :)
@KP- :) Thanks KP
@Punam- :D
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