I have a small motorcycle shop
next to a bus stand. I was living my dream when I invested my humble savings of
eight years at a factory to raise that three walled structure with a white
metallic door. I remember leaving no effort unturned to make it look like a
decent repair shop for a man who rode a proud Enfield or a Karizma to stop and
get the bike repaired. In first year of the shop I cribbed, cried and wiped the
careless grease or oil that landed on my floor or on my white door. My hard
earned money. This place justified my eight year slog and the first year of
business which was now slowly reaping thin but steady profits. Spotless it
should be.
All this meaningless cleaning
became a complete waste the day I saw a heart scraped out of the white coating
of my garage door. As if mocking my disdain the culprit had written his and his
beloved’s name along with the date- 16/10/05.
I was grumpy the whole day and
following morning I forced myself out of bed to walk and open that distasteful
door. “You are too prim and proper for a garage man” my customer poked his nose
into my issue. “If I left the grease uncleaned on your bike how would it feel?”
I responded without looking up and continued to fix the carburettor. His hand
rested on my back with a pat of pity. “Arreh, seems like you never proclaimed
your love Arshad Bhai! Let them write their hopes and scribble their names your door. Roshan loves Divya! Aha!
Beautiful Arshad Bhai, beautiful! I mean good thing nobody scribbled that F
word or some lame thing on your door.”
At that moment I was too hurt to
know some thing worse could have happened. But as if my customer’s tongue
marked its way onto my door the next day I saw an incomprehensible word
scribbled along with few more hearts and love declarations. I painted that part
of the door but in vain, here came the rains and the words peeped through with
a rusty finish. But over the past five years with seven more additional labours
and another garage space I had little time to be bothered by these
scribbling. In fact I had converted it
as storage for spare parts and it remained shut most of the time.
It had finally planned to get rid
of the door and replace it with new one. A fresh white metallic sheet with its
hinges fastened leaned on the wall as it was scheduled to be fit the next day.
That day morning as I sipped tea monitoring the fitting and cleaning of couple
of bikes a lanky young chap came by. “What?” I asked almost annoyed by the
incomprehensible expression on his face. Hesitatingly with a sheepish smile he
enquired about the old garage with a white door. “Arshad motorcycles, yes,
there was a small garage na uncle?” Worried about the recent government
poaching of the land areas I stood firm of feet and replied pointing towards
the structure, “That belongs to me. Why?”
He followed the direction, quickly took snap and walked by, “Five years
since I first scribbled our names on this door. Tomorrow I get married to her.
This photo will be a sweet memory of how it all began!”
Before I could gather what happed
he muttered a polite thanks and walked away. “Arreh, bhai! What’s your name?” I
shouted in an attempt to know at least one of the culprits. “Roshan and Divya”
he smiled like a little boy when he said that.
I stood there and stared the priceless marvel of the rascal whom I
scorned day and night for many months. I broke out into a smile and decided to leave
the door standing for few more days -a journal to bring alive the rusted
memories of loving souls.
The End
5 comments:
:) hehehe..... happens all the time. doesn't it... minute observation n skillful writing. well written, sam.
beautifully written, every word purposeful in that story - just as it should be! Lovely!
Awwww, what a sweet story. Kudos to your imagination here...:)
hehe....so cute! :)
Such a poignant tale. Marvelous narration. :)
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