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Saturday, August 27, 2011

Ignorant[Short poem]



How foolish was I, when I searched around
Seeking you in every one I met
How ignorant was I, all along
For you dwell in me, undiscovered as yet!

~Sam


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14 comments:

  1. A Sunny Yellow WindowAugust 27, 2011 at 6:09 PM

    Beautiful four lines! Brings back memories of my grandmom telling me this in her own warm words. Good one.

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  2. KPAugust 27, 2011 at 6:43 PM

    very strong words, in 4 lines.. nice..

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  3. Kalyan PanjaAugust 27, 2011 at 7:47 PM

    Sometimes somethings are so near yet we go distances to search for it...lovely words...beautifully crafted lines.

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  4. Saru SinghalAugust 27, 2011 at 9:11 PM

    Impressive writeup, lovely use of words...

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  5. AnonymousAugust 28, 2011 at 1:44 AM

    wow!! this is so awesome :)

    thank you for visiting my blog...

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  6. S. Susan DeborahAugust 28, 2011 at 11:03 AM

    Meaningful verse, Sam. I am reminded of a doha of Kabir's when I read this. The essence of the verse (doha) is something like this. The musk deer searches everywhere for that lovely smell which is emanating from his body, little knowing that he carries the smell himself.

    Joy always,
    Susan

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  7. ashishAugust 28, 2011 at 12:14 PM

    this is brilliant Sam! really nice...:)

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  8. smiling soulAugust 28, 2011 at 4:20 PM

    wonderful thought :)

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  9. VivekAugust 29, 2011 at 10:44 AM

    A very Nice verse ,
    Agrees to Susan .

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  10. HemantAugust 30, 2011 at 12:44 PM

    U write gr88 short poems....this one is an awesome piece for sure..

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  11. aakashAugust 30, 2011 at 2:05 PM

    yes, quite a verse..
    loved it :)

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  12. निशांत मिश्र - Nishant MishraAugust 31, 2011 at 1:02 PM

    Hmmm... I see it both at sensual and metaphysical levels:)

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  13. SameeraSeptember 3, 2011 at 8:24 AM

    Thank you everybody!! :)

    @Susan- Yeah.. that's the essence. Thanks for sharing :)

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  14. Sunil PadiyarSeptember 14, 2011 at 10:41 AM

    Very nice composition. Thought it is short, it has deep thoughts embedded...

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