Look into my eyes
Read what I cannot tell
Enchanted by your love
I am cast under your spell
My heart grew a shade darker
It is deep crimson red
It slipped from my grip
Into your arms it fled!
You leave me speechless
No words, I just smile
I hush my heart to stay calm
Douse in you for a while!
~Sam
nice poetic sista !! :)
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ReplyDeletemy heart grew a shade darker...brilliant imagery :)
ReplyDeleteI like the word 'douse':)
ReplyDeletelove it :)
ReplyDelete@Manasa- Thank you!! :D
ReplyDelete@Wanderer- Welcome to the blog! Thank you! :)
And.. congrats on your book. Will pick up a copy. :D
@Raksha- Hey Raksha! Yeah me too.. Douse!
@Yuvika- Thank you! :D
Nice. Very picturesque.
ReplyDeletenice emotions that create a romantic mood:)
ReplyDeletewow, that was striking 'My heart grew a shade darker...slipped and into your arms, and then hush so, it stays for a while'
ReplyDelete@Krsnaknows- Thank you!
ReplyDelete@Sajeev- :)
@Nikhil- Lol.. that was creative!