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Sunday, May 1, 2011

Love Note!

 

Your eyes give away what you hide
Your heart through your eyes confide
Conversing glances, words cannot define
I feel my heart dip in wine!

~Sam



P:S: I tried very hard to build this, add a para or two. But these four lines- are complete. No addition was possible.

7 comments:

  1. Sweet.. indeed it's complete!

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  2. Your heart would definitely taste yumm if dipped in wine.

    Liking the dance of the muse in you.

    Joy always,
    Susan

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  3. *sigh* those glances...

    and the sweet nothing we think/we believe we see in them.

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  4. I can picture a romantic couple over dinner... love the fact that the short poem conveys so much!

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  5. @Aakash :)

    @Vivek- Thanks!

    @Susan- Susan!!! How have you been? Hope you have recovered and are joyous as ever!

    Thank you! :)

    @Ampropali- Ha ha ha "we think/we believe" couldn't agree more!

    @Ambika- :] Yep Short poems!

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  6. Hey Sameera! I've just awarded you the Versatile Blogger award ... you can read my post at http://sunnyellowindow.blogspot.com/2011/05/versatility-in-blogging.html. It's totally your choice whether to play it by the rules or not :) But I just wanted to convey that I love spending time on your blog!

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