tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8396842103880641688.post1178412365550763418..comments2023-11-21T09:08:40.614+05:30Comments on Life in a jiffy..: Ashes- grey and darkSameerahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16387105701575296119noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8396842103880641688.post-68056509035458194402011-10-11T00:15:17.635+05:302011-10-11T00:15:17.635+05:30scarily dark... that light after the darkness is s...scarily dark... that light after the darkness is still missing.. maybe u can find it soon :)<br /><br /><a href="http://1mind2worlds.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Leo @ I Rhyme Without Reason</a>Vinay Leo R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13132856855570330824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8396842103880641688.post-40024037441940025442011-10-09T19:10:47.569+05:302011-10-09T19:10:47.569+05:30@Yuvika- Thank you.. The poem was built on that ve...@Yuvika- Thank you.. The poem was built on that very line. Glad you like it.<br /><br />Thanks Saru! :)<br /><br />Thanks KP- Oh That means a lot coming from you :)<br /><br />@Chintan- Ache is noW a blessed companion...And yes .. we need pain and happiness too :D<br /><br />@PeeVee- Yep! I usually end on a positive note but left this one little gloomy yet little strong.<br /><br />@Blackandwhiteheart- Hmm.. I borrow lot of grief and happiness from others. I soak in everything a person emotes. Pain- I felt it when I wrote this. Is it mine? I adopted it for those few moments- so yes it is.Sameerahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16387105701575296119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8396842103880641688.post-34796093198460482032011-10-09T15:02:50.397+05:302011-10-09T15:02:50.397+05:30"Where within me were hidden; these demons?
W..."Where within me were hidden; these demons?<br />Where, when and how- they grew?"<br /><br />- one who realizes and finds answers these two lines about self is half way unto making himself a better being.<br /><br />maybe pain got this out of you. it is only time that would answer.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8396842103880641688.post-3706088948467470782011-10-08T16:31:10.039+05:302011-10-08T16:31:10.039+05:30But one day, the pain will leave and the rays of h...But one day, the pain will leave and the rays of happiness will shine through the tumultuous clouds. Till then, befriend the darkness for only that will remain.CookieCrumbsInc.https://www.blogger.com/profile/06913746088715446566noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8396842103880641688.post-65321698163373626332011-10-06T22:48:54.761+05:302011-10-06T22:48:54.761+05:30<3
Ache is not a blessed companion...pain is ...<3 <br /><br />Ache is not a blessed companion...pain is what we need more than happiness :)<br /><br /><br />#_#<br /><a href="http://chintangupta.blogspot.com/2011/10/world-would-not-be-same-again.html/" rel="nofollow">1955-2011</a>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8396842103880641688.post-83205110957277863032011-10-06T22:38:37.477+05:302011-10-06T22:38:37.477+05:30This is one of my fav of ur works..
"Yet wit...This is one of my fav of ur works..<br /><br />"Yet within me are ashes.." <br />that loves to be reborn and change, that which frets to change..KPhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12952400437889908620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8396842103880641688.post-37391905137974460152011-10-06T21:42:21.457+05:302011-10-06T21:42:21.457+05:30Beneath the skin, I'm black and blue, beautifu...Beneath the skin, I'm black and blue, beautiful line...Lovely expression...<br /><a href="http://sarusinghal.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">Saru</a>Saru Singhalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12860642404643756746noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8396842103880641688.post-40073864095370180212011-10-06T21:03:34.140+05:302011-10-06T21:03:34.140+05:30Yet within me are ashes; grey and dark
- I partic...Yet within me are ashes; grey and dark<br /><br />- I particularly loved this line!Yuvikahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12871366730928566530noreply@blogger.com