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Wednesday, November 9, 2011

At First Sight! [Poem]



There is sudden charm around me
When I catch your glancing eyes
I feel beautifully young and bold,
Yes, that’s the feeling precise

When you walk towards me,
Futile, my effort of thinking twice
I could toss my world aside
To be enticed and to entice

When you pause to catch a breath,
Weigh your words before they fall
You make me feel precious
I am such a girl after all

As we stand beside each other,
With a million thoughts on our mind
We both are wishing the same-love,
“I wish you could be mine!”

~Sam


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19 comments:

  1. AnonymousNovember 9, 2011 at 12:33 PM

    lovely sammie:)

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  2. :-DeeNovember 9, 2011 at 1:29 PM

    Penned beautifully...!!! :)

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  3. Pakistani TeenagerNovember 9, 2011 at 3:28 PM

    Beautiful! loved it

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  4. Rahul BhatiaNovember 9, 2011 at 3:59 PM

    Very beautiful poetry...

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  5. roopzNovember 9, 2011 at 5:40 PM

    Lovely lines...
    Thanks for sharing...

    Regards
    village girl

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  6. Saru SinghalNovember 9, 2011 at 10:53 PM

    Well, this is one of the most romantic poems I have read ever. Simple, honest and lovely! You took my heart away with this poem:) :) :)

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  7. SameeraNovember 10, 2011 at 8:00 AM

    @Minnu- :) Thanks

    @Dee- :)Thank you

    @RPrincess- Thank you! :)

    @Rahul ji- Thank you! :)

    @Roopz- Thank you! :)

    @Saru- :) :D :D That comment for a wonderful poet herself. Ahh.. I feel proud :d Wishing you a lovely Day!

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  8. magiceyeNovember 10, 2011 at 8:18 AM

    an awww poem.... lovely!

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  9. AnonymousNovember 10, 2011 at 9:26 AM

    Lovely!!

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  10. HarshaNovember 10, 2011 at 10:20 AM

    Aww! This is awesome. So simple yet highly expressive. The last two paras stand out..

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  11. AnonymousNovember 10, 2011 at 11:33 AM

    :) really liked it :) its so simple yet so beautiful... every simple line means a lot :)

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  12. Sarah malikNovember 10, 2011 at 2:19 PM

    love is all we need...i always say that :)

    a wonderful thought interlaced in beautiful words!

    sarah

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  13. HemantNovember 10, 2011 at 4:14 PM

    Beautifully narrated and so much suitable for the title you gave to the poem....A sweet piece with no place for sourness in life :)

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  14. SameeraNovember 10, 2011 at 7:30 PM

    @Saru- Huge mistake..! In the comment for you it if from instead of for.

    @Magic Eye- Thank you!! :)

    @punamjr- Thank you :)

    @Harsha- Thanks! Yep.. the last two paras :)

    @rashmi- Thank you Rashmi!! :D Kya baat hai!

    @sarah- Thank you for the kind words.

    @Hemant- Thank you! :)

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  15. AyushiNovember 12, 2011 at 4:58 PM

    I left a gift for you at my latest post :)

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  16. Subhrashis AdhikariNovember 12, 2011 at 6:04 PM

    lovely lines sam :)

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  17. KPNovember 13, 2011 at 12:15 AM

    Ah.. lovely.. how nice it is to fall in love.. wonderful feel.. aptly expressed in those lines..

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  18. SameeraNovember 14, 2011 at 7:54 AM

    @Serendipity- Thanks! :) Will check it out!

    @SUB- Thank you!! :)

    @KP- :) Thanks KP

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  19. SameeraNovember 27, 2011 at 1:13 AM

    @Punam- :D

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