How naïve can you be, when you ask-
Tell me something about you dear,
How foolish is that, not to know,
Merely lending an ear is not how you hear
I will still tell you, that I lived twenty four,
Already changed like a million fold,
Little different I am each time,
Each time, my feet touch the floor
But, if you want to persist, pursue this goal
Be a friend, a friend till I am trembling old
And that’s only way will hear my dear,
Something about me- without being told!
~Sam
Now,this touched me.So I 'm gonna reply in verse too....:-D
ReplyDelete"The heights of joy,or the depths of pain,
They all change you,the same things don't remain..
But for every little moment you collect in your memory,
A small syllable gets added to your life's story!!"
Wish you a story with a super happy ending.......:-D
Hawwwwwwwww!!
ReplyDeleteI love you for this one <3 I so do!!!!!
I was reminded of the famous lines: grow old with me, the best is yet to be...
ReplyDeleteloved ur poem!
Love and friendship means understanding beyond words...
ReplyDeleteI love this poem. The last line of first paragraph is so true. Seriously, it's a mind blowing poem...:) Great work Sam...
ReplyDeleteSaru
This is damn good.. certain feeling goes beyond words dont they?
ReplyDelete@Rahul- Nice value addition to the poem. Maybe you should add a par to it and publish on your blog :)
ReplyDelete@Chintan/Shubh - Thanks!! :D
@Yuvika- Thank you!
@Corinne- So true!
@Saru- Thank you so much Saru!
@KP :)Yep.. they do!
Wow!! absolutely loved it!!! :)
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