Life in a jiffy..: Like the wind [Haiku]

Monday, August 8, 2011

Like the wind [Haiku]

Source: toolonginthisplace.blogspot.com

I am like the wind,

You sure, cannot, make me stay,

Till you breathe me in!

~Sam

P.S. It is a very simple haiku, little romantic and heart warming but if read between the lines there more to it.

10 comments:

Victor GuerraAugust 8, 2011 at 11:27 PM
Very profound.
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Saru SinghalAugust 9, 2011 at 2:20 AM
Remarkable....
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Sunil PadiyarAugust 9, 2011 at 11:52 AM
Few lines, few words but has lot in it... Loved it..
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KPAugust 9, 2011 at 2:50 PM
Very nice!! but makes me sad though!
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chitraAugust 9, 2011 at 5:18 PM
niceeeeeeeeee
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aakashAugust 9, 2011 at 6:19 PM
aahh a Haiku moment indeed!
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SukanyaAugust 9, 2011 at 8:13 PM
Sweet!!! Someone is getting better at this. Proud of u Sam :)
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HemantAugust 9, 2011 at 11:02 PM
Loved it....passionate lines.
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A Sunny Yellow WindowAugust 11, 2011 at 9:29 AM
Beautiful!
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SameeraAugust 13, 2011 at 9:12 AM
Thanks everybody! :)
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