I glance through my window
I see an old man
Walking across the lane
Coins juggling in his can
With every coin dropped
His eyes lit up
He wishes nothing great
Just a rice cup
I see him strain
Walking weak and thin
A kaput rough stick
His kith and kin
I caught his wise poignant eyes
Telling a tale of his tattered life
Once a young man’s misfortunes
Now an old mans strife
~Sam
awesome ....really really nice post!! nice simple and state words speaks ...it sound goood !!
ReplyDeleteJai HO Mangalmay Ho
gud one...love the pic
ReplyDeleteloved the last paragraph..beatiful
The geriatric strife!:(
ReplyDeleteAhem new template Sam...I like:)
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ReplyDeleteGood one Sam.
ReplyDeleteLiked the last 2 lines the best.
@Vivek
ReplyDeleteThank you!
@Vikas
Thank you!
@Raksha
Yeah :[
Yay!! Yay!! Yay!! Thank you Raksha!! :D
@Vijitha
:D Yep.. the last two lines sum it all up!
I loved how you used alliteration throughout the poem, special mention:
ReplyDelete1) Telling a tale of his tattered life
2)A kaput rough stick
His kith and kin