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Monday, March 21, 2011

Old man's strife!



I glance through my window
I see an old man
Walking across the lane
Coins juggling in his can

With every coin dropped
His eyes lit up
He wishes nothing great
Just a rice cup

I see him strain
Walking weak and thin
A kaput rough stick
His kith and kin

I caught his wise poignant eyes
Telling a tale of his tattered life
Once a young man’s misfortunes
Now an old mans strife


~Sam

7 comments:

  1. awesome ....really really nice post!! nice simple and state words speaks ...it sound goood !!


    Jai HO Mangalmay Ho

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  2. gud one...love the pic
    loved the last paragraph..beatiful

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  3. The geriatric strife!:(

    Ahem new template Sam...I like:)

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  5. Good one Sam.
    Liked the last 2 lines the best.

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  6. @Vivek
    Thank you!

    @Vikas
    Thank you!

    @Raksha
    Yeah :[

    Yay!! Yay!! Yay!! Thank you Raksha!! :D

    @Vijitha
    :D Yep.. the last two lines sum it all up!

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  7. I loved how you used alliteration throughout the poem, special mention:
    1) Telling a tale of his tattered life
    2)A kaput rough stick
    His kith and kin

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